Monday, July 30, 2007

Attempt at Poetry


Stand by me, stand by me;
The illusion of you is so comforting.
Suddenly, the past is a blur and
The path ahead so clear,
the light fills my eyes. I can't see.

Such bliss, this is;
Unbelievable, pure, soothing.
Pain dissolves, and regrets wash away,
Like dust from leaves
When it rains. Bliss.

And I flow with the current;
Not knowing where it leads me.
For I have you. You will not deceive me, will you?
And so it flows, this river
Of bliss and faith. Perhaps, even infinity.

And every river that flows
Brings a promise; the ocean.
And as I flow along, I get caught in a fallen tree,
The river, it doesn't stop for me.
And light fills my eyes;
Only this time, I can see.

And it strikes me like a bolt of lightening,
That illusions have toyed with my mind.
The world comes to a standstill,
Breath abandons me for a moment
As I fight the tide to reach ashore; struggling.

Emotions flood the mind
But the thirst for survival is so strong
That I am numb.
And then, I am alive.
Solitude, not loneliness, freed me from the bind.


I just wrote this. I know its far from being refined. I don't have a name for it though. Let me know if anything strikes you if/when you read it.

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Suneer said...

Nice, nice writing...coherency of thoughts.

as far as the name is concerned, You could put ur first line it self, "Oh...Stand by me", and end it with something similar.

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